Such a poetic expression of anguish and healing! There are so many entry points of relate-ability here.
Was the use of 12 descriptors intended? I don't know what the 12 steps are in the 12 step program, but I imagine this may be the emotional equivalents of the journey.
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Wow. I love this so much. So much impact in so few words. Great take on the prompt.
trauma then healing. The light at the end of the tunnel can be seen from this.
Oh wow. You really captured a lifetime here.
I'll just go ahead and "wow" again.
Such a poetic expression of anguish and healing! There are so many entry points of relate-ability here.
Was the use of 12 descriptors intended? I don't know what the 12 steps are in the 12 step program, but I imagine this may be the emotional equivalents of the journey.
What a great transition! I love what you did with this!
No Nicole the descriptors are not a part of a program that I know of but the way I have experienced healing from trauma myself.
Thanks to everyone for your encouraging comments! It really does keep a writer/blogger going to hear from you.
I love the empowerment at the end!
You use such strong, evocative words here to make maximum impact. Very smart! And so well done.
a beautiful journey. love it!
I love the steps. The freedom in the last line.
I am glad she found a light at the end of the tunnel.
What a tough, but powerful, journey. Thank you for sharing & great job with the prompt :)
EXCELLENT!
Says so much in so little.
good one!!! :)
Beautiful use of characters and words.
And in Him there is LIFE! :)
xVikki
Lance I love Helene. My favorite of all! She's got more inner strength than we can see... I think. Actually the last entry was awesome.
That read like a banner, a wonderfully inspirational one. Great job.
A full journey here. Well done!
CDG is right, it's a full journey. Reading it goes from darkness to light! :>
Very interesting - so descriptive and full of impact! I feel so motivated by the end ;)
Thanks everyone. Loved this prompt. Encouragement= :)
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